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One of a pair I made for my Advanced Modeling Final. First real organic modeling I've done. He didn't actually turn out much like I planned... But look, i actually rendered it this time! (Thanks for the help 
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I plan to actually finish this one. Lots of problems to fix, like give him teeth, fix the crotch and butt, make his legs less spindily, give him actual hair not a mess of polys etc.
Here are the Orthographics that I made for him.
***Critique would be highly appreciated!!***
)I plan to actually finish this one. Lots of problems to fix, like give him teeth, fix the crotch and butt, make his legs less spindily, give him actual hair not a mess of polys etc.
Here are the Orthographics that I made for him.
***Critique would be highly appreciated!!***
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welll, its really hard for me to critique something thats a thousand times better then what I could ever do but here I go anyways. What I like, the shoulders are great, you did a very good job on those. nad I like the front of the shirt and how it comes out, good ideas there, that belt adds a nice squeenix touch to it and looks good too.
however, hes very flat, and straight, from what it looks in the renders he has no butt what so ever, pop that out a bit, bring the front of his hips in more towards the crotch. Those shoes... I could go on fo rhours on shoes, they are hard to do, what i'm noticing is that they are very fat and again straight. Add devenition(sp) and detail, make em random, have em go in at some points, make them flatter at the tip, and it could be the render but they look to short so maybe longer. the center of the soles should come out a bit.
well I'm done I suppose, you did a great job, like I said far better then I could do.
however, hes very flat, and straight, from what it looks in the renders he has no butt what so ever, pop that out a bit, bring the front of his hips in more towards the crotch. Those shoes... I could go on fo rhours on shoes, they are hard to do, what i'm noticing is that they are very fat and again straight. Add devenition(sp) and detail, make em random, have em go in at some points, make them flatter at the tip, and it could be the render but they look to short so maybe longer. the center of the soles should come out a bit.
well I'm done I suppose, you did a great job, like I said far better then I could do.