Storyboard-Nessesary Witch

This is a storyboard I drew for a class. We were basically given this nonsensical story and told to storyboard it. All in all I like what I kind of pulled out of it, although I'm not sure it's what the author had in mind.

The story is by Jacob Bettany, here's a link to the orginal
For a more authentic experience read this first, then mine.

Edit: read left to right